英诗处女作 Sometimes I don't know why

文/冰花 (ROSE LU)


Sometimes I don't know why
I just feel so sad
I wish someone could read my mind
Come and stop by my side

Sometimes I don't know why
I just feel so confined
I wish someone could share my feelings
Come and ferry me out of this island

Sometimes I don't know why
I just feel so upset
I wish someone could understand my heart
Come and give me a hand

I hope you are that someone
My sweet dream in the distant land

 

不知道为什么

冰花 自译

不知道为什么
有时我是如此的哀伤
渴望有人解读我的思绪
陪伴在我的身旁

不知道为什么
有时我感到如同被囚
渴望有人懂得我的感觉
渡我出孤岛

不知道为什么
有时我感到是如此的担忧
渴望有人懂得我的心情
把我拯救

多么希望你是那个人
我甜蜜而遥远的梦想

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呵呵，恭喜你冰花，我正在读大学的儿子给这诗一个“B”，不要不满足，他给B，还说“PRETTY GOOD” 呢！加油！！另，非马老师是专家，由他评判最准了。

你儿子是学文科吗?

谢谢他! 第一次就得B很开心呀! 哈~~~

非马老师的评语如下:


[quote]引用第17楼非马于02-07-2007 21:48发表的  :

冰花第一次出手便有这样的成绩，实在令人高兴。



[QUOTE][b]下面引用由[u]风中秋叶[/u]发表的内容：[/b]

呵呵，恭喜你冰花，我正在读大学的儿子给这诗一个“B”，不要不满足，他给B，还说“PRETTY GOOD” 呢！加油！！另，非马老师是专家，由他评判最准了。[/QUOTE]
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[QUOTE][b]下面引用由[u]冰花[/u]发表的内容：[/b]

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我儿子不是学文科的但是他也喜欢写诗歌，下面是他16岁上高中时写的一首诗歌。献丑了。
Terrible Fallacy
Well it’s happened again
Broken hearts, and broken friends
Big and small I’ve seen them all
But I’ve never seen your words this tall

And it’s getting so old,
I can’t even tell you
Last time it was this cold
And things just fell through
CHORUS:
Because we are who we are,
But it won’t take that long
To realize, that we’ve got
No time to lose on this road

We’ve only got one life to live
And all these things only shorten the distance
We’ve only got one heart to give
Why not give it, another listen

Your voice is violent
Deadly and silent
And I just hope,
You’ve got heart right behind it

Just see my apology
I don’t care what’s at stake
It’s a terrible fallacy
We’ll bend but won’t break

CHORUS
….we are who we are
But it won’t take that long (x2)