[原创]星夜与凡高

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[原创]星夜与凡高
夜星
     --凡高“星夜”

教堂的尖顶高耸入云
丝柏的前颈直插天空
夏夜的星空正在冒火
夜幕压抑下的峰峦像波浪一样起伏,翻涌
寂静中安睡的是闭眼的房屋
挣扎中跳动的是难寐的灵魂
精神的旋涡席卷了意识的世界
整个世界都在扭曲而沸腾
夏夜,滚动的繁星燃烧着永恒
--那是灵魂无法栖息中饱受折磨的眼睛

Summer Stars—the Sleepless Scars
          ----To Vincent Van Gogh

Hair of cypresses sticks into heart of the cloud
Spire is touching deep of the sky
Resembling all heat and brightness
Starry sky is sparkling in the summer night

Scatter all over the darkness are the burning stars
Rolling and roaming far-away in the sky
Keep all their eyes shut
Silent houses had fall asleep under the summer night

While still fighting in vain is the sleepless soul
Now a fierce struggle in eyes of the sky
No one knows whether summer night was painted by the soul
Or the soul painted by the summer night

Spiritual flood striking cell of sense
Then all the world was distorted and revolving as the sky
How brave the flame is of the burning stars
Give birth to eternity of the summer night

No one knows the restless and suffered soul
Whose sorrow and burden simultaneously grow
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喜欢这首诗,活跃的、鲜明的、生动的意象,出于黑暗的,昏睡的,朦胧的夏夜。写出了意识的悸动,灵魂的不宁。情绪上的感觉很准确。
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总是感觉天上的星星是发光的伤痕。,旋转的星光是扭曲的灵魂。沉默的天空是无垠的陷阱,狭小的房屋只是灵魂的躯壳。感谢大家的支持,还请大家多多赐教1
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诗情天子不简单,汉语和英语的造诣非同凡响,诗作圆融雍容,有大家气象。
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好诗!但不喜欢这样写梵高。

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