诗歌以简洁的文字，简明入“梦”，The garden/ Is lively as your dream ；抵达的是“梦”的最深层。在这个晌午的白日梦境里，外面喧嚣的世界已消融，潜意识涌现，展现出一个陌生的内在世界。诗歌中，这个内在世界是声音的宇宙， 来自大自然与人体的声音交织融汇一起。手指，大腿，与树干，茎，叶等相提并论，视觉上的异乎寻常，但确实可以发生在深层次的梦里。因为，当意识中的EGO缩小时，外在世界的现实消失，内在的深度才能被见到。
The language of ten
Thousand sounds
Intricate sexy
Voices of leaves, grass
Blossoms, seeds, wings
Roots, trunks, branches
Fingers and thighs
or a dream
Where you make love
To your lover
From sundown to moonrise
Then you come
To a blue lake to drink
All stars’ honey
OR A DREAM，舒缓了诗歌的语气。在这个浪漫的爱情梦里，诗人以他情诗里常用的月光，星辰，与蜜汁表达性爱的甜美与快乐。湛蓝的湖水，日落，月升，浪漫而静谧神秘的性爱氛围。.
While keeping your lover
Inside yourself
Witnessing the volcano
Explode in a gentle kiss
于轻吻里火山的爆发，形像地将性爱的柔情与热烈呈现。作舟的诗歌里的性爱EROTIC但美的令人屏息。另一个比较经典的诗歌是DARK ROOM，Her laughter/Watery eyes/Flow through me / Like snow /Thawed at the peak / Under sun's caress / Down to the shady / Forgotten valley /Where fire Is buried。
Nothing has changed
As you reemerge
From the lake
The leaves are settling down
The blossoms are soaking in
All of the sun
. . .
火山爆发后，爱又回归平静，这是一种充满生机的平静：叶子逐渐屏息舞动，花儿无声地吮吸着阳光。
Today is Saturday, no doubt about that
这一段诗歌里，潜意识远去，意识回到主导。这时肉体的感觉重返，对外面的世界的感知复苏。
My toes are rubbing each other
Under the tea table
于茶桌底下磨蹭着脚丫，顽皮，但预示着知觉复苏，很确切的表达了久就沉思冥想后身体的反映，暗示了时间的流逝。
Your dreamy eyes become
Suddenly alert & locked
In a tug of war
With the squirrel’s
While a jet plane leaving
A long tail of white
Exclamation marks
Over treetops
如果说我从这首诗歌里除了感受到字面的含义，还有什么？我想，法国达达与超现实主义文化运动中最活跃的诗人之一TRISTAN TZARA 对诗的定义里就回答了我对这首诗歌的感觉。“ Vigor and thirst, emotion in response to the formation which is neither to be seen nor to be explained: poetry . . . A will to the word: a being on its feet, an image, a construction unique, fervent, of a deep color, intensity, communion with life.”