五律  登贡嘎雪山遥瞻世界最大冰瀑

[B]金银朝夕变，日出玉生烟。尝化千寻雪，遂成万仞川。
呼声难入谷，祷语易登天。久伫尘心净，惟思致吉蠲。[/B]

贡嘎雪山在朝阳下银光熠熠，在夕阳中金光灿灿，人谓朝银山，夕金山。主峰在阳光下，表层积雪蒸腾而成云气，犹如白玉生烟。

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[QUOTE][b]下面引用由[u]宇寒[/u]发表的内容：[/b]

最喜颔联和尾联，有大气象。
“祷告”若换做“默祷”，未知如何？宇寒浅见。[/QUOTE]

谢谢宇寒指点！中二联皆作了修改，请再批！敬茶！

[QUOTE][b]下面引用由[u]宇寒[/u]发表的内容：[/b]

凝成换遂成，又如何?[/QUOTE]

遂字好！即改。

圖文並茂！
曾去過冰川，最大的冰川沒到過，開眼界了。謝謝！