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    Two Poems_Cultural Revolution_related
    The Man Who Cut a Woman’s Throat

    For many years, I’ve been trying to figure out
    Who was that man, and how and why he did it
    Had he received any training as a surgeon?
    Or at least, had some experience as a barber?
    No other job with a knife
    Closer to a human throat

    I guess that he might not be a volunteer
    To perform that job
    She was a woman, a wife and a mother
    To cut her throat, like a hen on a holiday
    Muting her voice, including sobbing
    On the way from the prison to her grave

    Who was he? It doesn’t matter now
    When he did that job, as ordered
    His salary was 37.5 Yuan, the entry level
    In the People’s Government
    He retired,enjoying his remaining life
    A grain of sand vanished in a desert


    At Her Own Expense


    A Chinese coin of five cents
    Today, in my homeland, not
    Enough to buy even a button

    That year in Shanghai
    The hottest summer befell
    In a narrow street, a few
    Policemen, uniformed, politely
    Knocked at a door
    To collect a debt of five cents
    The fainting mother owed

    This was the cost for a bullet
    The country spent on her daughter
    In her dairy she wrote some words
    That she must die for it, deserved

    In Longhua temple, Shanghai
    Flowers blossomed in blood
    In 1931, Rou Shi was killed
    In 1968, Lin Zhao was shot

    * Rou Shi, a left-wing writer in early 20s, was executed in 1931 in Longhua Temple in Shanghai.

    * Lin Zhao, a beautiful and intelligent student at Beijing University, was executed in 1968 in Shanghai.











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      Dear Baolin,

      I'm no poet; so I can't comment on the poetic aspects of your poems.  However I can certainly speak with emotion to the theme of your work.

      To me, heroines like Miss Zhang Zhi Xin and Miss Lin Zhao forever live in our hearts.  Their blood was not shed in vain.

      From Rou Shi to Zhang Zhi Xin to Lin Zhao and many more thereafter, history really plays a mockery of us.  What a sad thing, that is, for us, for the soul of the nation.

      On the other hand, I'm also for one believe in forgiveness.  It's sometimes futile and even counterproductive to pin the responsibility of collective sin onto an individual.  When the two Germanies reunited in 1989, I believe the smartest thing the German government did was to put all the files of the former Democrctic Republic of Germany's secret police off limit for good.  Let the bygones be be-gone.  Only then can the soul of a nation be rekindled and re-vigorated, so that we don't forever live with a victim's complex.

      That's just my two cents, Baolin.

      Thanks again,
      Aihua

      PS. There is a wrong word in your second poem.  I think you meant "diary" and not "dairy."  Diary is a daily journal.  Dairy is used to describe milk products.
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        Aihua: You made good commments on my poems again, although I may not agree with your idea of forgiveness. As I cannot correct the misspelled word, can you help me correct it? Thank you again.
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          Like the first one, specially the ending.
          Maybe you can say "a woman, wife and mother". To me, it feels better in rythem. I guess it's Okay in grammar too.
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            Thank you, Baolin.
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