I didn't mean the translation is no good, conversely, I think you could master both Eng and Chinese very well.

The story of Ch and Eng is the same but the details are not.

The more description on the appearance, the more flesh and blood you give to the characters, I think.

Anyway, this is a very good attempt. Two thumbs up.
 

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